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azziria ([personal profile] azziria) wrote2014-05-08 10:59 am
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H50 drabble

Drabble written for the [livejournal.com profile] 1_million_words Cheated challenge.

Retaliation

"I don't get it, Rach. I offered to sort out the two-timing son-of-a-bitch but she insists she's going to deal with him herself!".

Danny's hot and bothered, tense and angry as he shifts from foot to foot, all up there with nowhere to go. Rachel turns to look out of the window at where her daughter and Steve are sitting quietly together on the lanai, dark heads close in earnest consultation.

Danny may be Grace's biological father, but sometimes Rachel thinks that she's got more in common with her other dad.

She almost feels sorry for her daughter's erstwhile boyfriend.

[identity profile] ignemferam.livejournal.com 2014-05-08 10:54 am (UTC)(link)
eeeeee! you're back!

[identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com 2014-05-08 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
This was lovely! And yes, Grace and Steve are no doubt coming up with some horribly diabolical plan.

[identity profile] simplyn2deep.livejournal.com 2014-05-08 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
oh man. I almost feel sorry for the boyfriend too. Almost.

it's good to see a drabble from you!

[identity profile] kaige68.livejournal.com 2014-05-08 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
This is fantastic! So so great!

[identity profile] davierose.livejournal.com 2014-05-08 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this!! And I love that you are 'drabbling' again! Hope your head is all better.
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[identity profile] fatorangekat.livejournal.com 2014-05-09 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah! I love when you write these guys! Thank you! As always, this was awesome little snippet.